PhoeniX
Junior Trainer
[M:-40]
Love issues T__T
Posts: 188
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Post by PhoeniX on Nov 17, 2009 16:50:23 GMT -5
Shane came to route 232 and saw a trainer with his Starly who are having fun. Shane:Why can't we get along like that...?I guess i'll take a rest here.This lake is really beautifull.
Shane layed under a tree started to imagine what his big bro was doing in Sinnoh. Shane:Dan, i wonder what you would say if you saw me and that annoying Starly? He looked at Ace's pokeball and released it. Shane:You know Starly...I'm not sure if we're going to be a great team..so..i'm going to release you... Starley was looking at Shane who left it at the tree and started to walk away from it. Shane:I think both of us will be happier this way.Bye Ace... Shane was walking aside the lake and suddenly some pokemon attacked him. *don't worry he will get starly back in part 2 so no need to ask why i released starly i just want to make it a little exciting*
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Post by teamdreamers on Nov 20, 2009 16:02:15 GMT -5
Please do not take control of any Pokemon other then your own. This includes a line like some pokemon attacked him. This is only your first time, so I'll let you off with a warning.
Anyways, I'm interested in seeing how the story advances.
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PhoeniX
Junior Trainer
[M:-40]
Love issues T__T
Posts: 188
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Post by PhoeniX on Nov 20, 2009 16:03:25 GMT -5
ok so please could you then make some pokemon appear that attack Shane (in part 2)and then Starly rescues him so that they become friends
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