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Post by teamdreamers on Dec 2, 2007 11:02:04 GMT -5
I got bored and went through my Fanfics on my Thumbdrive and found this story. I had to go back and rewrite it here and there but I think it might be worth it. Pokemon the Incredile Journey Max was bounding with energy as he got out of bed. Max had a black T-shirt on wearing with his casual blue jacket over it with some blue jeans and he was also wearing his lucky headband. The reason why was because he was so excited was because he was getting his very first Pokemon today. His twin sister would also get her Pokemon today. He had already decided that his Pokemon was going to be a Cyndaquil. Max loved the evolved form Typhlosion a lot. He got out o bed and raced to the Professor’s lab. The professor got one Pokemon from everywhere in the Pokemon world. Today he just so happened to get a Cyndaquil on Max’s first day of his journey. So he thought that fate wanted him to get a Cyndaquil. As Max reached out to grab the door to the Professor’s lab his twin sister, opened the door from the inside and rammed it into Max’s face. Max fell down from the force. When she turned her head she saw him lying on the ground. “I’m so sorry,” she said. She bent down to help him up. Max being his arrogant self slapped her hand away and got up by himself. “Geez, sorry. I forgot that you are a brat sometimes, I wish someone hadn’t already taken the Cyndaquil were I could’ve taken it, and rubbed it in your face.” “What? Someone already toke the Cyndaquil,” I said to my twin sister, Stephanie. “Duh, isn’t that what I just said, I on the other hand got me a much cooler Pokemon, see apparently the people in Kanto got their Pokemon…” she began, before Max pushed her out of the way to get inside. “Well, I’ll be,” said Stephanie as she began to walk home. “Prof. Palm, please tell me you didn’t give away the Cyndaquil you got today, please,” begged Max. “Okay, I didn’t,” said the professor. He was a skinny man. He was wearing blue pants, and a white lab coat that was buckled up. “Thank you, I guess my sister told me a lie,” said Max. “No I gave the Cyndaquil away,” said the professor. “But you said that you didn’t,” said Max. “Because you asked me too,” said the professor. He gently put his hand on Max’s shoulder, “but if you want an extremely cool Pokemon, the Kanto and Sinnoh, both messed up getting me the Pokemon I wanted, and I decided to give those Pokemon away.” “My sister told me about the Kanto mix up,” said Max. He began wondering what Pokemon she got. “Yes, but the Sinnoh, they are going to look like Psyducks when they realize their mistake.” “Why what Pokemon did they send you?” asked Max. “Ah, I’ll only tell you if you take the Pokeball, but be warned he is a very mischievous fellow.” “I’ll take him, he sounds like a lot of fun,” said Max as he grabbed the ball and threw it. The ball opened up and white lightning flew out and landed on the ground taking the shape of a Pokemon. The reason why I didn't give him a Cyndaquil, because then he would have evolved it into a Typhlosion in like three pages and then he would become unbeatlable because I don't want a Typhlosion to lose. What pokemon do you think it is?:I already have a pokemon figured out but I want to see what the other people think:
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Post by Newhubb on Dec 4, 2007 0:27:14 GMT -5
It's an Iggilybuff ;D
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Post by teamdreamers on Dec 9, 2007 10:08:37 GMT -5
Wow, didn't think of nailing him with a stink bomb. No it is a...
The Pokemon that appeared was almost like a blue fox standing on two legs. It had a black mask coloring its face and two black things hanging down, they looked like ears. The Pokemon’s feet were also black and its chest was also colored black. The Pokemon glanced up at Max. . “Um…professor, what Pokemon is this?” said Max. “You actually don’t know. Here I guess you’ll need this trinket,” said the professor as he handed Max a long, red, flat machine. The machine had a blue dot at the top. “Just point the blue dot at the Pokemon you want information about and it’ll give you all the information you need to know about it.” Max did as he was told. Then the machine opened and said, “Since this is your first time use I am a PokeDex. I contain information on all of the known Pokemon. The Pokemon you selected is Riolu,” said the Machine. “Riolu is the Emanation Pokemon, The aura that emanates from its body intensifies to alert others if it is afraid or sad.” “Wow, this Pokemon really knows how to get its point across,” said Max as he clasped the Pokedex together and reached for Riolu’s Pokeball. “Riolu,” said the Pokemon as he struck out with his palm at Max’s stomach. Max fell to the ground clutching his stomach. “Ah, Riolu’s Force Palm. It is always a sight to behold,” said Prof. Palm, laughing. “Riolu,” said Riolu, as he looked Prof. Palm. “Riolu,” screeched Riolu as he charged at Prof. Palm hand extended. “Noctowl,” said a bird as it flew in from an open window and tackled Riolu. The Pokemon was a light brown everywhere except on his wings where they were a dark brown. The Pokemon had at least a dozen of upside down black triangles dotting his belly. The Pokemon’s head had even lighter brown feathers sticking out of his head. “Ah, Noctowl you have always came to my aid,” said Prof. Palm. “Wow, is this your Pokemon,” asked Max. “Of course it is. Noctowl has been mine ever since I caught him on my first day as a Pokemon trainer, and he has been loyal ever since,” said Prof. Palm. “Well, I wish I could stay around and chat but I gotta go,” said Max as he was running home. When he finally got there he saw two backpacks ready and packed. Then his sister came out with a Pokemon dancing at her heels. The Pokemon was basically a brown cat, with some white fluff around its neck and the tip of its tail was white, too. “Hey, Max,” shouted Stephanie. “Guess what?” “What?” said Max as continued through the door to the house. “Mom said that we get to go on the journey together,” said Stephanie keeping up with Max. “Why? Why do I have to spend my journey with you,” asked Max. “Because mom doesn’t think that either one of us are old enough to go on a journey together,” said Stephanie. “She went to the next city, so let’s go see her.” “Fine, but only because then I can change her mind,” said Max.
What is the name of the next city?
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Post by Unknown on Dec 9, 2007 10:09:53 GMT -5
Hmmm.... Pewter City!
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Post by Newhubb on Dec 10, 2007 13:05:10 GMT -5
Newhubbville ;D
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Post by teamdreamers on Dec 10, 2007 16:44:25 GMT -5
Okay... maybe Pewter City and Newhubbville, might be the third city.
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Post by Unknown on Dec 16, 2007 9:24:05 GMT -5
Hmmm.... maville
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Post by teamdreamers on Dec 17, 2007 10:11:29 GMT -5
Pewter City it is!
After exiting the house, Max and Stephanie, began their walk to Pewter City. "Why did I get stuck with you?" said Max. "Because we are brother and sister and more then that we are twins. Besides it is no walk in the park for me. I mean look at how you dress you have no flair," said Stephanie. "I don't need flair, because I'm entering in the Pokemon Championship not a girly contest," mocked Max. "Contests are not girly tons of guys do them, too," said Stephanie. They arrived in Pewter City after a few more means words were exchanged. "Oh, kids," said their mom as she saw them coming up the road. "Hey mom, do we really have to travel together I mean she is annoying," said Max. "And you have no style, but we are both going to make do," said Stephanie. "Max, look..." began their mom.
What is their mom's answer, yes or no? Another cliffhanger just like real T.V.
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Post by Newhubb on Dec 17, 2007 15:38:45 GMT -5
Yes Haha, let him suffer > (Evil smile)
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Post by Unknown on Dec 22, 2007 9:12:45 GMT -5
Yes Haha, let him suffer > (Evil smile) O.o
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Post by teamdreamers on Dec 22, 2007 11:07:31 GMT -5
Yes, he shall suffer Newhubb, he shall.
"Max, Stephanie, is just to young and so are you so I think it would be best, if you two traveled together," said Max's mom. "WHAT!? I mean she is such a girly girl. I mean contests I can't think of anything more girlish," said Max. Stephanie looked at Max with an evil glare. "Oh, come on Max, its not that easy for Stephanie, either. I mean look at you, you don't really seem like the kind of guy a stylish girl like your sister would like to hang out with," said their Mom. Stephanie giggled. "That's right Max, now come on we are going to need a head start if we want to be the best." "Alright," said Max down. "You know what I haven't seen either of your pokemon will you show them to me?" asked their mom. "Okay, I choose you Rika," said Stephanie, as her Eevee emerged from its pokeball. "Rika? Why would you name your pokemon," asked Max. "Oh, yeah Mr. Smarty Pants, naming your pokemon is half the fun of catching them," said Stephanie. "Okay then say hello to my unamed Pokemon Riolu," shouted Max, as Riolu emerged. "Oh, your Riolu he is so cute but he looks like a Charles to me," said Stephanie getting down to eye level with Riolu, "So I'll call him Charles." "Riolu," shouted Riolu as he hit Stephanie in her face. "Good job, Riolu," laughed Max. "Oh, really? Rika tackle," commanded Stephanie. "Eevee," screeched Eevee as she tackled Max.
What will happen next?
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Post by Unknown on Dec 31, 2007 13:08:40 GMT -5
Max falls over and Riolu and Eevee battle.
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Post by Newhubb on Jan 1, 2008 19:13:23 GMT -5
There mother says: "I also found someone to go with you" And a guy with a shiny, pokerus inflicted Walrein comes out.
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Post by teamdreamers on Jan 3, 2008 13:18:13 GMT -5
Newhubb, that sounds more like a Elite Four member. Pichupikarai, you are 100% correct!
"Umph," grunted Max as he hit the ground. "Riolu," said Riolu as he glanced at Eevee. "Eevee," screamed Eevee as it started to tackle Riolu. "Riolu," said Riolu, as he jutted out with a Force Palm. "Eev," replied Eevee as he dodged the attack at begin to run around Riolu. "Rioluuuu," screeched Riolu as he began to Force Palm, in random directions. "Stop it," shouted a man. Both Riolu and Eevee stopped. "What?" said Max and Stephanie. "If you guys are going to fight do it at the Gym," said the man. "Oh, Flint's gym, right," said Max. "Not anymore, Flint and his family moved away and now the gym is completely redecorated for a new gym leader and he specializes in..."
Who is the new Gym leader? And what does he specialize in?
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Post by Newhubb on Jan 3, 2008 20:49:51 GMT -5
It is... That one funny lookin' water guy in Shinnoh.
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Post by teamdreamers on Jan 13, 2008 10:11:13 GMT -5
Wow, I thought more along the line of a poison gym leader, like Koga.
"...Poison types," said the man. "Poison types," said MAx, "You mean like Weedle and Koffing?" "No, I mean like Dewgong, and Houndoom, of course like Weedle and Koffing." "Man, little bro you are so dumb," said Stephanie. "Geeze thanks. And you know we are twins right that means we born at the same time!" "Uh-uh, I was born a full two minutes ahead of you." "Two minutes. What did you call a giant clock." "Be quiet," said the man, "but the gym leaders here have a slight rule, each and every one of them the poison gym leader's rule is that you must have two or more pokemon to compete." "But I only have one," said Max. "Then what are you doing standing around here for, go out and capture yourself a Pokemon," said the man pointing out of town where a few patches of grass could be seen. "Fine," said Max. Max walked away towards the grass, Riolu followed for some odd reason. Stephanie didn't move, she didn't see why she had to. "Here pokemon, here pokemon," said Max. Touching the grass with a stick. Riolu was reclined on a rock, next the grass. Suddenly a Pokemon busted out of the grass. The pokemon was a...
What Pokemon is it... And please be a bit realisitic in other words, NO LEGENDARIES!
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Post by Newhubb on Jan 14, 2008 10:46:14 GMT -5
Thats okay. I already caught all the legendaries so he can't possibly meet one. Ummm... I'm not sure what region this is in. But Poison is my favorite type ;D that and bug
It is probably a Pidgey, or Hoothoot.
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Post by teamdreamers on Jan 20, 2008 9:26:11 GMT -5
I don't know what region this is either, I'm probably going to keep asking for the next town and make a weird region.
"Pidgey," screamed the pokemon as it flew above the grass. "Wow, a Pidgey," said Max as he reached for his PokeDex. "Wait, catch first ask questions later. Riolu Force Palm." "Riolu," said Riolu as he stood up slowly. "Riolu now use Force Palm," shouted Max. "Riolu," said Riolu as he turned around and slammed his palm into Max's stomache. "You don't like me do you?" asked Max. "Riolu," replied Riolu shaking his head. "Pidgey," screeched Pidgey as it flew down tackling Riolu. "Rioluuu!" shouted Riolu force palming toward the Pidgey. Pidgey dodged every attack expertly then landed a successful Peck on Riolu. "Riolu," said Riolu as he screeched toward the edge of the grass. The Pidgey ready itself for another Tackle. "Riolu," said Riolu. Riolu jumped up and grabbed Pidgey's tail feathers and began to unleash an onslaught of Force Palms. "Pidgey," screeched the tired bird Pokemon as it landed and plummeted to the ground. "Great, now's my chance! Pokeball, go," said Max as he threw the Pokeball. he Pokeball opened up and sent out a red light that wrapped around the Pidgey. The Pokeball landed and began to wiggle. Soon the Pokeball stopped and it lit up. Max walked over to the Pokeball and picked it up. "I caught a Pidgey!" shouted Max. "Nice job, but still you caught a pathetic Pokemon," said a man with a pokemon at his side.
Who is this man? And what is his Pokemon.
You can also say what you think he is going to look like, but you don't have to.
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Post by Newhubb on Jan 21, 2008 19:33:40 GMT -5
I bet he is tall, blonde, and named James. And he probably has a Turtwig with him. Or I could be that one person that took over for Koga in the second generation when he went to the pokemon league. Wait! Never mind, that was a girl. Wait! Maybe it's Koga himself! Ummmm...
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Post by teamdreamers on Feb 1, 2008 11:06:02 GMT -5
To PG: I'm having a little bit of trouble with the name of this guy so I'll let you decide it since I can't seem to find where it is on my flashdrive. Oh and a hint, it is his rival.
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